Brevity & White Space

Air it out! Even if your email has lots of content, which ideally it shouldn’t, you can create space and a natural eye-friendly design low that Card Members will read.

Overview

Brevity and space work together to create emails that are easy to read, scannable, and visually inviting. In a crowded inbox and fast-paced digital environment, users don’t read—they scan. Clear, concise content and thoughtful whitespace help your message land quickly and effectively.

Brevity & White Space
Why?
  • Improves readability on all devices, especially mobile
  • Increases engagement by focusing attention on key actions
  • Reduces cognitive load, making content easier to process
  • Supports accessibility, particularly for users with visual or cognitive impairments

The 3 C’s: Clear, Concise, Compelling

With users scanning rather than reading, every word and pixel counts. By embracing brevity and space, and applying the 3 C’s (Clear, Concise, and Compelling) you make your emails easier to read, more impactful, and more likely to convert.

Clear

  • Use plain, straightforward language
  • Eliminate jargon and ambiguity
  • Structure your content logically: headline → supporting text → CTA

Concise

  • Say more with less
  • Trim every sentence to its essential message
  • Use bullet points, short paragraphs, and scannable formats

Compelling

  • Focus on the “why” for the reader—what’s the benefit?
  • Use action-oriented language in CTAs
  • Create urgency, relevance, or curiosity without being gimmicky

Guidelines

Content

  • One message per email whenever possible
  • Front-load value—lead with the most important information
  • Use CTAs early and clearly—don’t bury the ask at the bottom
  • Follow guidance in our 7 Top Tips for Email Copywriting 2025 PDF

Layout and Spacing

  • Use ample padding between sections, text blocks, and buttons
  • Avoid visual clutter—group related content, remove distractions
  • Design for mobile-first, with vertically stacked, well-spaced elements

Best Practices

By designing with brevity and space, and applying the 3 C’s, your emails will be more effective, accessible, and user-friendly. Consider:

  • Is the message clear and easy to understand at a glance?
  • Is the language concise and free of filler or redundancy?
  • Is the content compelling, with a reason to keep reading or take action?
  • Is there enough whitespace for a clean and calm layout?
  • Are important elements (headlines, CTAs) easy to find and/or tap?

Questions?

Connect with the DLS Team on Slack or by email.

Resources

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